Dear Pals,
After you finsih the writing, it is essential for you to proofread and edit it.
After all that, you can publish your work and share it with the world.
In addition to self proof-read, we often require other readers to help us revise our writing.
We can take advice from others to see if any changes or imporvement are necessary.
2 people work together to help each other’s essay. For example, No. 2 and No. 3, Number 4 and No. 5, so forth.
Help pick up mistakes and make corrections on sentence structure, word choice, punctuation, or spelling, and then give some comments on its content, organization.
Please give your comments in the following format.
Example:
Proofreader: 202 00 Chen Chien-chou, Joseph
1. Corrcetions:
It talks about the price of Troy, Paris, fall in lovewith the queen of Myceane, Helen.
falling in love
The love which was not allowable cause the war between two men and two countries.
caused
The war situation was so intense that both of the troops died too many soilders.
were killled
Intelligent Odysseus adviced a plain to defeat Troy
collocation dictionary: http://140.122.83.196/cgi-bin/cgiwrap/~hjchen/colocation2/query.pl
suggested/proposed/devised a plan
2. Content and Organization:
Nice work! You have given sufficient details and examples to support your ideas, and the main idea is clearly expressed in one topic sentence. Well-Supported. Nice Work!
